It's pretty good but about the hands you can try this exercise. [link]

Hey, I saw your post on the forums... and I gotta say, for a first drawing, this actually is quite good! Draw more, only better you'll get!

Of course, you'll hit a few irritable bumps along the way, but don't give up! Just keep drawing!

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Thanks!

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Thanks! and i know, im drawing more right now trying to get better at what i did wrong

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Yup, that's good... don't let your mistakes irritate you, let it teach you.

Good luck!

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Will Do!

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The hand are fine except you stopped drawing them too soon. Fingers are all just too short, need an extra joint in there.
Also, get more self-esteem! *prods with stick*

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Salutations. I saw your post on the art forum as well. I will provide as much information as I can.

First off, feel awesome. This figure is recognizable as Cloud. It's a good step, meaning that you have the ability to convey what you're trying to convey. Otherwise, people could only realize who this was by the title alone.

You're technique of defining the character consists of using line. Most of the details on his costume exemply that.This shows that you have the capicity to note smaller details-which can effect how an image looks as a whole.

However, this is a double-edged sword. By relying on lines to define the image, the values become weak. Overall, the values on this image revolve around the middle. Nothing is overtly dark or bright. Learn to use the full range of your pencil(s), and to use an eraser for highlights. When you master the idea of contrast and form, the images will become more realistic and interesting, to enhance your knowledge of showing detail.

Whatever you decide to do, good luck.

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Criticism of the Constructive, please.

Aha

Ill try and make them longer next time

Thank you

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